on monday
i saw a shell on a beach –
a beautiful shell on a delicate beach.
except it wasn’t a shell
and it wasn’t a beach.
it was beautiful though, and delicate.
i thought about that shell
on tuesday.
i saw a shell.
nickreeves
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Something about this is just perfect. Like the shell on the beach that wasn’t a shell on the beach.
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I know exactly what you mean. It’s a perfect poem, but I couldn’t begin to explicate it–which is what makes it perfect!
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🙂 x
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Brilliant
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Lovely!
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N hop
W
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🙂
not sure why or what
but, IM&O,
best comment ever! xo
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Oh my goodness!!! This is a new function I did not realize my phone was able to do. I don’t know whether to laugh or cry.
xo
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… it’s so deep
… & meaningful!
🙂 xo
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It seems like a plausible abstraction in response to your poem, no?
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Sure do. We’re the best!
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Zero z
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i know!
sweet dreamzzz
xo
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😂😂😂 So much love. You guys are the best.
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I do love that you love these comments. Perhaps it’s my subconscious reaching out. BUT, also a comment I left on someone’s post earlier today left my screen name as “array”. So I’m having an identity crisis too.
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oh, you have all the fun IM&O
hip hip array
🙂
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I can’t even think of a witty retort. Luckily in future my phone will do it for me.
❤️
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I love this!!
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Oh man! I LOVE this. It’s just perfect.
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🙂
Funny isn’t it… how some things just write themselves, while others take forever.
Thanks! xo
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Oh Absolutely! They sure do. I am well-aquatinted with that!
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Gorgeous!
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Thank you, Paul.
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“Shit haiku” (keywords)!!! You are freaking hilarious.
Till I saw that, I was more like wow… this is deep…
and delicate.
Is that your art? It is amazing…
xoxoxo
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well, it is shit haiku!!
🙂 😉
uh huh.
stay ace… and delicate.
xoxo
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Wellll… it’s anything but shit… but also anything but haiku. 😉
Thank you for making me smile so much. Stay ace too. :)) xoxo
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Wow!
We’re all having a brilliant day so far
… & we deserve it!
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🤗💛
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I’ve just discovered you, I’m glad! Love this poem!
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…Ain’t that always the way of it? – someone discovers you before you discover yourself! -:)
I shall take this as a good sign! Thank you very much House of Heart.
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Your very welcome, Holly
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yay!
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