Barely rested, but with fevered beats beneath
my skin, I drew her supposed aroma in
and out and in again
and all around this sleeping creature
my world contracted and expanded;
and I wondered of her dreaming.
To pass the time I figured cracks,
pretended craters, dead seas, frontiered
charts across her ceiling. On her walls
I traced our shadows’ leak and meaning,
our slang and our common tongue.
I explored our soft and sheeted region
with hum and thumb and tip of finger.
I conjured, I fancied, from her features,
miracles with brush and stroke.
I breathed her hollows and, as if by magick,
we wreathed this room with imagined matins.
I found this so enchanting, all of it, N. Reeves. Each finely placed word. I love the use of the word “wreathed” as an act all its own, of gentle placement, of decoration but warmly, not gaudily, so. And “matins”… I have loved them all my life and never knew this name for them. 🙂 Thank you for your magnificent words and scenes, my friend. xo
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Thank you, kindly, A.M. Conway. xo
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“Enchanting” is just the right word to describe the poem.
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Power house stuff 🙂
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With thanks from across the pond, Grady xo
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Xoxo pondguy
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🙂 🙂
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Sense as returning waves beneath old crumbled cliffs…
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Ah, love, et cetera.
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Tagged as “shit haiku?” Really Nick…
A near triolet
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Which reminds me of one, of you:
Triolet on a Line Apocryphally Attributed to Martin Luther
Why should the Devil get all the good tunes,
The booze and the neon and Saturday night,
The swaying in darkness, the lovers like spoons?
Why should the Devil get all the good tunes?
Does he hum them to while away sad afternoons
And the long, lonesome Sundays? Or sing them for spite?
Why should the Devil get all the good tunes,
The booze and the neon and Saturday night?
–A E Stallings
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Thanks, Kim. I like this. x
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🙂
…A near toilet
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Oh my…. breathtaking…. Allison said it all perfectly… yes the matins but all the other weavings too. Divine divine, to read this hit of magick from you.
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Thanks Lia! xo
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Wow! This is so descriptive and just amazing. Very powerful and immersing as well. Your writing style is awesome.
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Thank you, Lucy!
Made my day! xo
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‘Magickal !’
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Thanks Paul!
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