i watched a wet cormorant on a rock in a tide pool,
her drape wings seeking heat from the bleak october.
and at noon i thought of you at your grandmother’s funeral,
in the miniature jewels of the yew tree, beneath lichen fur.
i imagined you in your annie hall get-up, cradling a clutch of gerbera,
in a ransacked mackintosh knotted just so, explaining your hips.
i pictured your nyloned ten percent legs
and i thought of you as a sparrow in a hedge;
felt the drum roll rain on mum’s sombrero of death.
remember the poem you read when we met
– of the bird pulling the worm from its bed?
did you consider these lines again today,
in the rain, with your beautiful daisies.
i will have to ask you later.
an ethereal whisper in the poetry of seasonal transition EAPoe would agree love love love thanks for sharing Master Reeves xoxoxo
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stay cool. stay warm. stay hot.
thanks, grady – never grow cold.
xoxo
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ditto xoxo
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Nick, it’s really, really beautiful. The details are amazing and the whole thing is like a moving painting, filled with love and melancholy.
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Bless you, Lia.
Stay ace
xo
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Exquisite. Love the imagery.
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Thank you, Michele.
Appreciated
xo
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I read this as an associative memory of a lost love–until the last line, which took me by surprise in the best possible way. I just love how you did that.
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Thank you, Liz! xo
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You’re welcome, Nick!
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You have a marvelous way of creating a profound wistfulness with your words.
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08:46
Day made!
Thank you!
xo
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So grateful for connecting with you!
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Likewise!
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Some you read and scroll on from… this you read and linger, not yet moved on.
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Very much appreciated, Eric.
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Wonderful write. Effective use of imagery to evoke emotion.
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Thank you, VJ.
Much appreciate your time and energy.
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You’re welcome.
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