EIF Poetry Challenge #11: The Results
A wonderful surprise (& delight!) to find my free verse piece, A Loose Tally, being chosen in the latest EIF challenge! Many thanks to Liyona & the folks at Experiments In Fiction. xo
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A Loose Tally.
“I have the rent until Valentine’s.”
Something in the way you said this made me smile,
made me wonder if two months was a heartbeat or forever.
You sat with one leg beneath the other on the kitchen counter,
the moon on your unbuttoned wrist and the patient rain running
(oh, should I say like tears?) behind you in the skylight, and I began,
just quietly – so as not to unsettle anything – to make a loose tally
of the opening and closing of this front door and of the teabags in the jar,
of our sweet silences and, of your words, I made penciled treasures and promises.
Beautiful work. And congratulations.
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Congratulations, Nick! Well done!
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Oh wow, this one is just so lovely Nick… breathtaking. A delight to read xoxo
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Congrats Nick! and a wonderful poem!
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Well deserved, Nick – exceptional writing.
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Thanks, Eric.
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Worthy of recognition, Nick. Bravo!
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Thank you, Michele.
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Congratulations on your well-deserved win! As Liyona noted, once I entered the world of the poem, I didn’t want to leave. I think I’ll stay for a while; I hope you don’t mind.
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Wonderful piece. No wonder the accolade!
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Thank you, Rick.
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Thanks Ingrid x
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