Rising early from their bed, in the stillness of the orange room, the grate ash glowing, a blade of winter sun slashing the thin-curtain (and falling across the boards and the giveaway upright slouched by the wall, honkytonk), she dressed, humming a vague tune, in the mirror.
Cotton, corduroy, cotton again (with sunflower print). Nylon mauved her legs. She scarved her hair with a rag from a silk collection she kept in the unpainted dresser; pinned a fringe into the shape of a wave or a kiss. Pursed, pale lips. Pearl necklace. Planted herself in soil-blown shoes, leather, but not the laces they came with, and left.
Lovely to hear you sing Dylan – sets of the mood of your poem perfectly. There are poets who lean more towards the visual arts in their poetry, others who lean more towards music, but your poetry incorporates both.
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Thanks, Ingrid. You up super early today? Have a lovely weekend, you deserve it. x
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I have a regular 3am insomnia stint but luckily I normally fall back to sleep 😴
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Well, enjoy. Catch up soon x
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Every phrase a sensory delight. ✨
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Thank you, Michele Lee.
I am enjoying writing your full name – the sing-song of the second half of ‘e’ s & ‘l’s! xx
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You are welcome. 😊
I am enjoying the fullness of your musical comment. 😁 xx
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I listened first to the song, Nick, before I read the post and it worked like magic. Like I wasn’t surprised but hugely curious. An unheld aftermath that is still with me two hours later. Thank you!
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🙂 Thanks, Rick! Very kind!
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Wonderful Nick. I absolutely love your take on Dylan. And love the excellent poem too.
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Cheers Bob!
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“Planted herself in soil-blown shoes, leather, but not the laces they came with, and left.” Tingles!!! Freaking out!!! Gorgeous line! Torn between envy and swooning! :)) Divine. (Fainty emoji) :))
Then, the music is surreal beautiful… never heard that song before, or maybe not like that.
And the artwork. It’s just gorgeous. Gahhhh!!!!
How the heck do you do this all so well??
(The silent answer, blowing in the wind, comes to me in the form of a beatnik’s response to a random passerby asking, “How do I get to Carnegie Hall?” :))
Anyway, love. xoxo
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🙂 Thank you, Nadine!
… yeah, I guess! The rest of the time I just waste! 😉 xoxo
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Same haha. Or can we call it “dream”? ;)) :)) xoxo
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Yes! Dream!
The dream ain’t over xx
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Bravo!
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When the Lo-Fi Sofias get here, maybe I can support them at The Surf Cafe? xx
Peace out. xx
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Yes!
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that would be so great!
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Beautiful music and words!
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Have a beautiful Sunday, MM x
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It was good to hear another recording from you–and it went so well with the poem, which is absolutely exquisite. This line went straight into my favorite metaphor/simile folder: “a blade of winter sun slashing the thin-curtain.”
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Thank you, Liz. xx
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You’re welcome, NIck.
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Enjoyed the music and song. Soothing and charming. Love it.
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🙂 Thank you x
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Welcome 🙂 x
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But how will she walk in the shoes if they don’t have laces? I fear this puzzling question will not allow me to sleep tonight. 🙂
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Indeed, Tanja!
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Aren’t you going to let me know???
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Well, on this occasion, her leaving will be only temporary. x
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Outstanding song Nick and amazing use of words and thoughts.
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Thank you, Coyote. Good night from North Tyneside.
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Lovely music, so mesmerizing! 🌸
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🙂 Thank you, Isha.
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You’re very welcome 🌸
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