The thinner spectre of the two,
pale, serene and half in shadow,
from the creases of the curtain,
floats a plaintive lullaby –
her song for sleepless children.
“This plastic fort for painted cowboys.
This tepee for a brave.
This mountain range of books to read –
[‘The Kid took the reins and the pony, skittering at first the skree, began the long ascent up the mountain…’]
This blanket tells our story.”
*
And, in the ether, crudely drawn
crayoned stars; paper ships, saturns torn
and the man in the moon
and the woman on the landing,
gleaming in the length of light,
brightening the bedroom door –
pauses, leaning in,
says, goodnight before she says
good morning.
*
A piece from the archives, reworked a little – there is reward in rewriting – for mothers, poets, and for children, in celebration of unpaid work and education, for strength that’s wielded with loving hands and soft caresses, for your stories and your power, your sunlight, given freely, and for singing: thank you.
#IWD2022
Just beautiful! You melted my heart 🥲
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Thanks, Ingrid x
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This reads with the same delightful lullaby on the tongue and peace in heart as most bedtime stories do in their effort to impart peace and beauty into dreams. ❤
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Thanks, Jaya!
Sweet dreamzzz
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Oh my 🥰 this is my favorite thing
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Bless ya, ec. xo
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“This painted fort for a plastic cowboy.” / “he took the reins and the pony began…”
Top notch intersections for a piece, squire. xo.
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Thanks, writtencasey. Who can guess how many times it was the fort that was plastic and the cowboy painted? Nope. Neither I! And even now that see/m/s more righter 🙂 xo
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Sweet and reflective, this poem captures the essence of childhood. 😇
Love the photo.💖 The smile remains unchanged.
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Thanks, Michele
:)x
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..and with that lovely line and two it’s off to drifting and dreaming. So nicely done. X
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02:46
Sweet dreamzzz
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9:11
…thank you 🌷
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Also, I suspect that is a very adorable young you in the photo ☺️
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This is beautiful 😻
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Thanks, Delia! xo
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Sweet!
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ps. Thanks!
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Wow Nick, this is really something special. Definitely one of my favorite of yours. Well done!
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Thanks, Bob. I keep having a tweak here and there…
*when it all falls apart, that’s a tweak too far*
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perfect. that’s it, perfect xoxo
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If it’s good enough for g, then it’s good enough for me! Fanxy.
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its…..fning beautiful the words lent baby Master R s picture soul and a radiant warmth xo
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well crafted words.
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Thank you for dropping by 🙂
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Love this – so lyrical and numinous – terrific imagery! Well done!
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Thank you, Jan (and the guys of course)!
x
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A classic and a favourite! Love the reworking! Love ❤️
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‘the man in the moon and the women on the landing’ is perfect. I love the wonder of everyday domesticity.
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Thanks Jane
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a lovely song in words Nick so beautifully done. 💖👏
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Thank you Cindy 😀
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You’re so welcome Nick! 💖
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Wonderful, Nick. This brings back memories of my mother telling me bedtime stories. 🙂
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